Drake's life. (Second try)
Jul 23, 2013 15:11:57 GMT -8
Post by mtc1998 on Jul 23, 2013 15:11:57 GMT -8
Drake Jackson Deeps was eight years old when he came to ponyville. He was sick, hungry, tired. When he reached the skirts of Ponyville. He was amazed to see so many things. Drake walked to the town area, ponies were shocked and confused what he was. They even started whispering. This made Drake feel uncomfortable. Then one of the ponies shouted "Get him!" The ponies started running after him. He had no idea why. He didn't question to run for his life though. He ran to the edge of the forest where he hid in a bush crying softly.
Drake heard a soft humming near him. He started to Hypervale. The humming stopped and it was coming closer to him. The pony opend the bush and drake screamed out of fright. He started wailing. "Please don't hurt me! I didn't know how I got here! I have no idea what's going on! Ple-" The yellow mare put her hoove on his lips. "Shhhhhhhh,It's ok. I'm not gonna hurt you." Drake looked up at her. "Y-Your not?" she looked at him calmly and replied "Of coarse not. Don't be afraid. My, you look sick. Please come with me. I will take care of you." Drake looked at her in suprise and hugged her. "Oh my...T-thank you." she said in a sweet voice. "My name is fluttershy. What's yours?" He looked in shyness and said "Drake. My name is Drake."
Fluttershy brought Drake home to her cottage and layed him down to rest. "Don't worry. Your safe with me." She blew out the candle for drake and left him to sleep. For next two days, Fluttershy took well care of drake. She introduced her friends to him. Rainbow dash taught him to fly. Rarity made him clothes in her fashion style. Pinkie cheered him up when he was sad. Twilight found out drake had some fire element in him that way he could control and absorb fire. She helped him control it.
The next day Drake went to get apples for Fluttershy as she has run out. The ponies were giving him dirty looks and more whispering. Drake just tried to ignore it untill a pony tripped him on purpose which made him fall hard on his sides. All the ponies near him laughed at his humiliation. He got up and cried back to the cottage. Fluttershy saw he ran to the bedroom and went to check on him. "D-Drake are you ok?" He only replied in a sobbing voice. "H-how can I go out feeling like such a freak?" Fluttershy looked at him sadly then said "Drake. You are not a freak. You are special the way you are." Fluttershy got up the bed near him and drake turned around hugging her. "Fluttershy? You'll never leave me right? " She looked at him calmly. "Drake. I promise you I will never leave you. I will always be there for you." Fluttershy holded him tight. "Shhhhhh. It's ok Drake. It's alright." She layed him down to rest. She then sang a soft lullaby to him. Drake fell asleep. "Goodnight Drake." She blows out the candle. (END OF PART ONE)
Drake heard a soft humming near him. He started to Hypervale. The humming stopped and it was coming closer to him. The pony opend the bush and drake screamed out of fright. He started wailing. "Please don't hurt me! I didn't know how I got here! I have no idea what's going on! Ple-" The yellow mare put her hoove on his lips. "Shhhhhhhh,It's ok. I'm not gonna hurt you." Drake looked up at her. "Y-Your not?" she looked at him calmly and replied "Of coarse not. Don't be afraid. My, you look sick. Please come with me. I will take care of you." Drake looked at her in suprise and hugged her. "Oh my...T-thank you." she said in a sweet voice. "My name is fluttershy. What's yours?" He looked in shyness and said "Drake. My name is Drake."
Fluttershy brought Drake home to her cottage and layed him down to rest. "Don't worry. Your safe with me." She blew out the candle for drake and left him to sleep. For next two days, Fluttershy took well care of drake. She introduced her friends to him. Rainbow dash taught him to fly. Rarity made him clothes in her fashion style. Pinkie cheered him up when he was sad. Twilight found out drake had some fire element in him that way he could control and absorb fire. She helped him control it.
The next day Drake went to get apples for Fluttershy as she has run out. The ponies were giving him dirty looks and more whispering. Drake just tried to ignore it untill a pony tripped him on purpose which made him fall hard on his sides. All the ponies near him laughed at his humiliation. He got up and cried back to the cottage. Fluttershy saw he ran to the bedroom and went to check on him. "D-Drake are you ok?" He only replied in a sobbing voice. "H-how can I go out feeling like such a freak?" Fluttershy looked at him sadly then said "Drake. You are not a freak. You are special the way you are." Fluttershy got up the bed near him and drake turned around hugging her. "Fluttershy? You'll never leave me right? " She looked at him calmly. "Drake. I promise you I will never leave you. I will always be there for you." Fluttershy holded him tight. "Shhhhhh. It's ok Drake. It's alright." She layed him down to rest. She then sang a soft lullaby to him. Drake fell asleep. "Goodnight Drake." She blows out the candle. (END OF PART ONE)
